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  1. Brian Bollert Brian Bollert says:

    Poorly Edited and ExecutedI voted for this on Kindle Scout originally because it seemed like a fun concept Not the most original as I ve seen at least 2 other novel series using the trapped in a horror film premise, one of which I have read and it was rather good, Terror Infinity being translated online from Japanese I believe But I still had high hopes, in fact I especially liked the Master of Horror concept.But I feel like this book in many ways was a massive letdown I gave it the second st Poorly Edited and ExecutedI voted for this on Kindle Scout originally because it seemed like a fun concept Not the most original as I ve seen at least 2 other novel series using the trapped in a horror film premise, one of which I have read and it was rather good, Terror Infinity being translated online from Japanese I believe But I still had high hopes, in fact I especially liked the Master of Horror concept.But I feel like this book in many ways was a massive letdown I gave it the second star because there were a few spots that were funny, at least they tickled my funny bone But the combination of numerous typos, most in the neighborhood of homonyms which led me to believe the author wrote the entire text using Voice to Text because steal became steel and several others that escape me at the moment I should probably start using the note system on my Kindle if I m going to make a habit of writing reviews Add to that the utterly one dimensional characters whose growth was poorly played out, for example the character of James and his realization of family vs career at the end of the book was kind of out of the blue and not really relevant in my opinion to the conversation he has with the Master of Horror In fact it almost seemed like he was supposed to growduring the book but the relevant sections were either forgotten or culled during on edit As for the source of all the trouble, Martin, the Army Ranger, was a completely unbelievable character as anythingthan a beer swilling jackass Ignoring the part where the entire group magically comes to terms with being stuck inside movies without any sort of discussion as some sort of testament to their training, no man or woman that egocentric would have ever been allowed to serve as a member of the Rangers, a specialized team based group of elites Then his personality and intellect yo yo d several times, one moment he s too stupid to keep his mouth shut in a combat situation and the next he s reading a map and determining the safe route from multiple monitors in an instant in a very Rain Man esque manner There was also the portion where he began explaining Greek mythology after they ended up in a museum that seemed completely out of character The situation with James and Jessica s relationship also seemed poorly explained, with the discovery of her pregnancy and the way everyone intuited it through the actions of the film characters But that was actually reasonable compared to the burgeoning relationship of Q and Melissa, when in a bid to wake her from Freddy Kreuger dreamland, instead of slapping her, he molests her I know many of you may say it wasn t bad, she said it was ok, but he couldn t hear her, he just arbitrarily decided that groping her was the best way to wake her and get some I can only assume the author was living out some wish fulfillment there.And circling back to the typos maybe grammatical errors as well, not sure as that s my weak point if the author has an editor then he needs to fire him and fast If he didn t have an editor, then he needs to seriously look into getting one, or even just a group of beta readers who can help out with that sort of thing I can sort of see why it might not have been picked up by Kindle Scout for publication, but a little polishing and this book might have been able to really shine


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