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Disciplinary Action [KINDLE] ❆ Disciplinary Action By Jane Davitt – Thomashillier.co.uk Dear Author,The boss was called away for the day and asked me to step in and interview some new contractors This one pressed all the right buttons and we ended up on the couch in my boss s office Then Dear Author,The boss was called away for the day and asked me to step in and interview some new contractors This one pressed all the right buttons and we ended up on the couch in my boss s office Then guess who walks inPhoto Description Two hot guys, one in a shirt and tie, one dressed casually, are lying on a couch in an office, shirts unbuttoned, kissing, totally into each otherThis story was written as a part of the M M Romance Group s Love is Always Write event Group members were asked to write a story prompt inspired by a photo of their choice Authors of the group selected a photo and prompt that spoke to them and wrote a short storyRead the story here or find it in Love Is Always Write Volume Genre contemporaryTags office romance BDSM threesome blow job bondage spanking D s relationship first timeWarning BDSM spanking mild pain playWord count ,.


About the Author: Jane Davitt

I m English by birth, but I moved to Canada twenty years ago, so I have two places I call home I started writing in my thirties, hammering out millions of words of fanfic with a growing sense that yes, this was something I could do, wanted to do, needed to doA decade ago, I became a professional writer of m m romance and I ve never regretted my choice of career Back then, telling people what I wrote got me raised eyebrows or puzzled looks Times have changed Now m m romance is thriving and I m happy to be one of the many writers contributing to this always evolving and expanding genre Free reads and my fanfic are here Jane Davitt at AO.



10 thoughts on “Disciplinary Action

  1. Heather C Heather C says:

    Hmm, this really didn t work for me I was really into it in the beginning but then it just fell short I think my biggest problem was Zach, the MC He seemed a little too picky and whiny for someone who was allowed to be the 3rd in a standing relationship I really liked Jack and Taylor and their banter I would defiantly love to read a story about them Although I would probably still have a problem because I didn t care for the spanking either Tears and snot are just not sexy to me The wri Hmm, this really didn t work for me I was really into it in the beginning but then it just fell short I think my biggest problem was Zach, the MC He seemed a little too picky and whiny for someone who was allowed to be the 3rd in a standing relationship I really liked Jack and Taylor and their banter I would defiantly love to read a story about them Although I would probably still have a problem because I didn t care for the spanking either Tears and snot are just not sexy to me The writing was good I just didn t care for some of the content


  2. V V says:

    3 losers together..perfect


  3. Lily Lily says:

    This was a 4 star read for me until I got to the end The protags intrigued me and the sex scene was hot but view spoiler I felt Jack s insistence that Zach must keep things totally completely secret from everybody puts him firmly as a plaything instead of part of a relationship hide spoiler For me this didn t even feel like a HFN as far as a relationship goes much less a HEA Those couple of sentences really ruined the feel of the story for me However, that s just my personal opinion This was a 4 star read for me until I got to the end The protags intrigued me and the sex scene was hot but view spoiler I felt Jack s insistence that Zach must keep things totally completely secret from everybody puts him firmly as a plaything instead of part of a relationship hide spoiler For me this didn t even feel like a HFN as far as a relationship goes much less a HEA Those couple of sentences really ruined the feel of the story for me However, that s just my personal opinion and may not bother others Overall though it s a good story


  4. Syfy Syfy says:

    The author chose an incredibly difficult scenario to tackle, and in my opinion, nailed it If you don t like BDSM and or menage situations, skip it If you re ok with it, I think you ll love this short It s thoughtful, fun, as well as hot and kinky Young Zach only ever fantasized about submission, fantasized about his boss Jack Then one evening, when given a golden opportunity to step up to the plate at work and impress Jack, Zach s manipulated into a scene involving The Man himself and his b The author chose an incredibly difficult scenario to tackle, and in my opinion, nailed it If you don t like BDSM and or menage situations, skip it If you re ok with it, I think you ll love this short It s thoughtful, fun, as well as hot and kinky Young Zach only ever fantasized about submission, fantasized about his boss Jack Then one evening, when given a golden opportunity to step up to the plate at work and impress Jack, Zach s manipulated into a scene involving The Man himself and his bratty sub How does Jack handle it What does Zach do And Taylor, the brat, can I have him Please


  5. Emma Sea Emma Sea says:

    I really like the way Davitt addresses the third wheel issue in a menage The solution still leaves me feeling slightly tense and uncomfortable if I was Zach I d be a bitpissed off I guess I just prefer true love stories, and this seemslike animal physical attraction Still a very well constructed story with great characters and believable dialog not always achieved in D s stories


  6. Camille Camille says:

    I don t feel as if the emotional hesitation and bid for inclusion were ever fully resolved The confession to feeling like garnish wasn t answered satisfactorily Physically the bond is there, satisfying each other s kink I suppose, but even Jack s description of the foundational relationship left be a bit cold Not enough emotion Plus, I don t know how I feel about having to hide a relationship Still a bit on the outside, isn t he


  7. Maiko-chan [|] Maiko-chan [|] says:

    3.5stars


  8. Sandra Sandra says:

    Offered for FREE from the M M Romance Group, Love Is Always Write Volume Three.1.5 stars So, maybe it s my fault, because I m not generally into menage books anyway But this had a little bit of an emotional disconnect for me It was a little too clinical in describing the initial sex scene I didn t finish to get to the second one without enough descriptors of how Zach actually felt, not just what he though about the situation And as far as the BDSM aspect I m all for fun and light sex sc Offered for FREE from the M M Romance Group, Love Is Always Write Volume Three.1.5 stars So, maybe it s my fault, because I m not generally into menage books anyway But this had a little bit of an emotional disconnect for me It was a little too clinical in describing the initial sex scene I didn t finish to get to the second one without enough descriptors of how Zach actually felt, not just what he though about the situation And as far as the BDSM aspect I m all for fun and light sex scenes, but given the nature of the situation I thought it needed to beserious This was his first time, and one second Jack is giving an order, than Tay is making a joke and Jack just rolls his eyes And Zach was back talking all over the place, he never seemed appropriately submissive neither did Tay for that matter I guess I felt like they needed to set clearer boundaries And like Zach, I also thought he felt like a third wheel Jack and Tay were adorable, but Zach felt out of place to me and he didn t really add anything to the story except some whining So anyway, just didn t work for me


  9. Bettye Kanady Bettye Kanady says:

    The story was good and definitely hot Jack, Taylor and Zack were a trio of way too much But, I think Zack may have been a little bit spoiled His personality screamed it He had standards he wouldn t work anywhere that had homphobic assholes on its payroll The time to settle down was when he was tired of having fun Well, when it came down to crunch time and he was given the rules about what was expected of him, he was angry because what was going on didn t really include him But why The story was good and definitely hot Jack, Taylor and Zack were a trio of way too much But, I think Zack may have been a little bit spoiled His personality screamed it He had standards he wouldn t work anywhere that had homphobic assholes on its payroll The time to settle down was when he was tired of having fun Well, when it came down to crunch time and he was given the rules about what was expected of him, he was angry because what was going on didn t really include him But why should it have He was going to be a new boy or new submissive and he wanted that without going through the motions just having it magically happen for him I guess, the whole point of this is to say, I liked Taylor and Jack, but Zack was too whiny for me It didn t make the story any less good, he just was Other than that, it was a good read Pretty sexy actually


  10. Wendy Ann Wendy Ann says:

    A little slice of reading heaven Menage and BDSM are two of my favorite genres, but combined in a free read, wow I loved the feeling of authenticity I got from reading this story the tangled emotions of a third person Zach entering the equation of an established relationship between Jack and Taylor Zach s reactions to the kinky play and Jack honing in on what really made Zach tick Yummy After reading a couple of her prior books, this author is among my favorites and I ll automatically A little slice of reading heaven Menage and BDSM are two of my favorite genres, but combined in a free read, wow I loved the feeling of authenticity I got from reading this story the tangled emotions of a third person Zach entering the equation of an established relationship between Jack and Taylor Zach s reactions to the kinky play and Jack honing in on what really made Zach tick Yummy After reading a couple of her prior books, this author is among my favorites and I ll automatically read anything she writes Loved it and I wantof these 3 guys thank you so much


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