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That Day ➽ [Download] ✤ That Day By SarryMatts ➲ – Thomashillier.co.uk With his job and relationship on the line Felix has his work cut out of him Enter Max his brother's pushy best friend and Felix can't figure out if he's a hindrance or his savior Status CompleteLength With his job and relationship on the line Felix has his work cut out of him Enter Max his brother's pushy best friend and Felix can't figure out if he's a hindrance or his savior Status CompleteLength words.

  • Online Fiction
  • 150 pages
  • That Day
  • SarryMatts
  • English
  • 12 March 2016

10 thoughts on “That Day

  1. Ami Ami says:

    38 stars rounded upFelix is a wedding planner whose job is on the line and must asks help from the last person he wants to ask help from His brother's best friend Max Dawson made Felix's life miserable when they were growing up Unknown to Felix Max has been crushing on him for yearsI saw other reviews only gave this around 3 stars I could understand why Yes the characters don't always make sense Yes some of the things were over the top Yes Martin Felix's boss was too much of black and white villain However after a string of so so books even DNF one of them and all of them published which means they're properly edited this FREE story comes as a consolation I have no issue what so ever with the mispelling or the grammatical error I'm not an English native so I'm not very nitpicky about that Plus the story is charming and that trumps over the lack of editing I love the fact that Felix is clueless with Max's feeling I love the scene at the zoo and how Felix asks Max whether he can adopt a giraffe cute I love how the bride is not portrayed as a crazy bride instead she becomes Felix's best friend I love Felix's older brotherWhen I smile happily at the epilogue view spoilerI think Max's wedding vow is so sweeeet hide spoiler

  2. Tailtiu Tailtiu says:

    Thank you SarryMatts for sharing your story It's a free read and I enjoyed it than a few paid for books

  3. Seregil Seregil says:

    Towards the end I was hoping to find out some complex reasons behind the actions of some of the charecters but they weren't very complex or well explained Martin was a bit too much of a villain too it was too simple to hate him

  4. Tutu Tutu says:

    25 starsI’ve read so many great unpublished books lately that I kind of got used to great uality when it came to these stories So it makes reviewing this a bit difficultBut still I’ll take into account that this was written by an amateur writer and try not be too harsh That being said I think this is an ok read I got to finish it which is not what I can say about all published books I read You can tell the author is new at this there are a lot of things missing from the story the characters don’t always make sense they don’t really develop thought the story There are times when everything is so predictable and times when you get hit with things that you really don’t see coming and not in a good way I can say that I did find some things kind of funny but then the author took them a step too far thus making the whole package not work for meI guess it was just childishNot the worst thing I read but it wouldn't be something I really recommend if you want something well written

  5. Rachel Rachel says:

    Fantastic A mm mills boon To every detail the millionaire who's secretly in love with the mc but been hiding it by being a dick the silly angst the needing help and bad current boyfriend etc etcI don't think it's particularly that good but I just really liked it

  6. Lo-Lo Lo-Lo says:

    This for me has great potential but in dire need of tweaking and editing I do find that I have a rather fluffy soft spot for Max and Felix

  7. Anna.E Anna.E says:

    uite fun little mystery

  8. Redgal Redgal says:

    Fun read

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